Svet
Janka Candidate
[M:274]
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Post by Svet on Oct 14, 2012 19:03:05 GMT -5
Name: Accalia Kain Age: Twenty-three;Fall;October 31 Gender: Female Sexuality: Heterosexual Rank: Dragon candidate Location: Sylain Personality:A hunter. She is good with stalking and sneaking, and causing some trouble, but she mainly watches over her family and friends. She makes friends easier than any person you would think. She has her hard looks when she is out hunting, but when in the town, she is the sweetest thing you can find. She loves her hunting though and she goes out everyday. She always brings back food for her mother to cook, and Accalia and her father always go over new techniques. Lia has her home personality and her hunting. Hunting she is barely there. You can not find her just by looking. You have to wait for her to go by you. But at home, she makes herself known to the town. Lia Loves to go around the town and just look at things. She loves to go and talk to the townsfolk. She also likes to make friends with everybody, a rider or not. To her, everybody is the same no matter if they get to ride a Dragon or Janka or not. She will sometimes go out and hunt food for families of her friends who need it more than she does and her parents understand that perfectly. Appearance:Brown hair frames her head, but when she is hunting, it is up and out of her face. She wears baggy clothing but she can still make hardly a sound in her clothes and shoes. She can keep her brown eyes focused on one thing and all things. She is a great multi-tasker when it comes to hunting and carving. Lia hides her head and face in a brown hoodie, which keeps her warm and helps hide her. Lia will wear the nature if she is trying to hunt hard game, and she will take her time hunting. At home, she dresses in the nicest clothes and she wears her hair straight down. She has jewelry that she wears consisting of bracelets and necklaces. Lia usually wears white around her family and friends in the town. Only a few really know her true colors for the whole day. Lia does not wear a hoodie or anything in the town, instead she wears a really nice jacket. She wears high heels around the town. When she is training for her bonding, she wears pants and a durable shirt with some boots. Her family does not want to see their only daughter in rags, but instead they want to see her in riches. Family:Svetlana Kain-Mother Adam Kain-Father Pets:Siberian Husky(Will buy later) Dragon Name: Oeryth Dragon Color:Pink {A62A77} Dragon Gender: Female Dragon Age: 0 years Personality: snippy, vain, sophisticated, authoritative Parentage: Silver Sradiphath x Bronze Jeseth Size: Full Length – 19'3'' History:Accalia was born in the fall in the month of October on the 31st. She was born to a rich family, but her family trained her how to hunt at the age of eleven. They bought Lia her first bow when she first started to hunt and she loved the sport. She loves to bring home food for her family to cook, which makes them keep their money, which made them richer. Accalia was told at the age of twelve that she would be a Dragon candidate and her training started when she was told. Her parents favored telling her about the stories of the old days when dragons and their riders took care of the town. Lia goes out the meadow and runs to the forest to hunt everyday. She always comes back with some kind of game for her mother to cook and her father teachers her new techniques. Lia is an only child and she loves her parents equally. She sometimes wonders what it would be like to have a younger sibling, but the thought gets pushed away when she sees how unhappy some families are. Lia will always try to help her friends out with game if they need it, but mainly only her family. Now she is twenty-three. Her parents are dead and she is alone in her bog house with all of the money. She still has her duel personality and she still hunts, but she stays out longer to bring in more prey for herself and her friends. Desired Color: Black or brown Undesired Color: Anything bright Reasoning: She loves to huntInjury/Mauling: Anything short of killing What are the staff to do with this character if you go inactive? Adopt
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Post by Skittlez on Oct 15, 2012 15:20:14 GMT -5
Good, but the personality is a bit short, only 126 words when it at least should be 200. Besides that she's fine
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Svet
Janka Candidate
[M:274]
Posts: 65
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Post by Svet on Oct 16, 2012 10:46:37 GMT -5
Updated my dear
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Post by Skittlez on Oct 16, 2012 14:35:52 GMT -5
ACCEPTED!!!!Good job! She seems nice, a hunter hmm? Anyways, you have received 20 marks for being accepted and 3 more for fixing your one mistakes
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